Writing a song!... if i only had a gutair..

[Inbracer]

Well *^^* I am trying to write a song, i got good themes/ideas, but i am not good with ryhmes. So.. anyone has suggestions or either programs to help me out?

Also, is there a program to remove voice from some song so i get only music?

thx!

[HITMAN]

Hmmm I dont know of any programs Tyris, but i will search for some:)

[AnTh3m]

bffffff....:whs: sorry mate i'm not the next American Idol :)

[GIPN35]

Do you use FL Studio?

[GunChicK]

i got some programs for edit songs and stuff what programe you realy need for edit songs?

[Inbracer]

Well i just need some music, got the song (i think >.>) FL Studio??

[Wes]

Use fruityloops, reason

[GIPN35]

Use fruityloops, reason

^^ that's what i said Wes ---> FL studio,but reason is a verry VERRY hard programme to learn.

[Tim]

Sorry, I don't know of any programs. :) Hope you find it.

[C0RV3TT3]

well i use cool edit pro, for editing songs, but i doono if its that the most apropiate :s

[Deblack]

hey mate if u just want music without voice ...just type in your limewire "instrumental" just beat without voice...and you can use cool edit pro as corvette said or use any version of ejay to edit songs!!! have fun mate ;)

[GunChicK]

i got fruityloops for you and the thin what corvette said i can uploud it to music host and can put the links here,bus its take a day for me!

shall i do that for you?

[Tim]

Just out of curiosity I will try to find Fruit loops just to see what all it does :)

Test1 (http://tctransporter.net/entertainment/Music/test.mp3)
Test2 (http://tctransporter.net/entertainment/Music/test2.mp3)

Which one you like better? It's currently a work in progress, thought someone would like to hear what you can do with Fruit Loops :) I like it so far.

[Inbracer]

Oh wow, thats good. Gota get me the program.. I like test1 more. Where can i get it? xD

[GunChicK]

hey tyres i can give you fruity loops np.
i can att it on this site with win rar or on x-fire.
pm or x-fire me if you want

[Inbracer]

Hmmm well the song is working good. Its hard to renember few words tho i mean as in think of rhymes lol. Is there a rhymes program? ^^'

[GIPN35]

Hey Tyris, you shoud post the text here.Is it in ur launguige?

[Inbracer]

Nah, its on english alright.. English for me is my first langue sorta o.O Well uhm.. like i said, i'm still working on it lol xD!

[SEAL_scout]

Well Tyris you should check out my beats and maybe you can write a song over 1 of the beats. It is a lot easier writing a song when you know the beat your writing too/on. Just let me know if your interested and if you would like i can make shorter beats for you. Fruity Loops is good to make beats, But the one that you can download really isn't that good and it really doesn't have good sounds and instruments on it because it is the free version. But i got thousands of instruments on mine and thousands of sounds. So let me know if you want me to make some "short" beats for you. ;)

[Inbracer]

Heh sounds good, sure will take alot of work

[SEAL_scout]

I knew you would say that you lazy bum.:p

[Inbracer]

Well, here's the sample of my song.. I still got to work on it! :cool:
Man it kinda sucks right now lol.. Hmmm, I am getting the ideas day by day so uhm...















(Always) Walking in my dream
Walking/searching the path I have never seen

My dreams grant me the wish
But never the permission to act
on my own will...

I open my eyes to the mind,
I awake my soul from the bind

Just staring at the celing
I'm searching for that feeling

What keeps me going is inside of me
I will never ask is this right place to be

Just let it be!
There's nothing left for me
That's all I need
And that's all I need



Staring at the mirror I see my face
But all I see is a disgrace

I just started to cry
And let my soul go dry

I see the terror in my eyes
I never want to say goodbyes

But now Its holding me back
I couldn't care to look in my head!

[SEAL_scout]

Not bad......................................

[Inbracer]

Right:P not what you had in mind, altho how come you aint on xfire scout >.>

[GunChicK]

thats a pretty good song you got there

[GIPN35]

Heh nice one :) i like it!

[Tim]

Nice lyrics Tyris ....... I mean it :) .... it rhymes, and I'm sure will sound good under the right music :D

[Inbracer]

lol, mmmmyeah T.- like i said, alot of work to be done..

[SEAL_scout]

how come you aint on xfire scout >.>

Yeah, sorry bout that, but things got really hectic after the funeral of one of the bravest NYPD officers, so i just been going online to our forums and not really have time to chat on xfire. But time will pass, I hope. Well Training will still be on so no worries right now things are a bit hectic at the moment for me.:msnsad:

[Inbracer]

Ow.. sorry to hear that. You'll be fine... right?

My song is great day by day, its working out just fine. I love this part, i edit the song day by day

Just started to cry
Let my eyes go dry..
There's no need to try
Just say goodbye!

I was so alone
Until I met your soul
You are talking on the phone
And I’m feeling like at home!

[Tim]

That is awesome, which I could think up words like that :)

[SEAL_scout]

Keep on writing Tyris, You are doing good.

[Inbracer]

Yeah, heck i just ran out of idea. I get best ideas when I'm walking my dog out xD man i love to sing when no one is around. Well thx anyway for the support guys, working on it every day ^^

[Inbracer]

Yaaaaaaaaay Here we go!

Always walking in my dream
Walking the path I never seen

Gazing at the top floor
Start walking to the door
Keep your soul under control
Don’t lose the hold
Oh nooo(some music)

Dreams grant me the wish
To kiss girl that I miss

I was so alone
Until I saw your smile
Talking by the phone
It feels like home…
Oh yeeea(some music)

What keeps me going is inside of me
Never ask is this right place to be

Just let it be!
Don’t make a wish
Leave it as it is
Nothing left to see

That's all I need!
That’s all I need!

I open my eyes to the mind,
I awake my soul from the bind

On the mirror I see my face
But all I see is a disgrace

I just started to cry
And let my eyes go dry

I see the fear in my heart
I don’t want to be torn apart

But now Its holding me back
I couldn't look in my head!

Just started to cry
Let my eyes go dry..
There's no need to try
Just say goodbye…

Power and damnation
Freedom and temptation

Always something to loose
Hard to tell what to choose


Ok uhm, any suggestion please go, any ideas about song please say and i might put in song. Grammar fixes if you want ^^

Note: im not done lol -.-' fixing song day by day.. Hmmm!

[SEAL_scout]

Good Artists, like R. Kelly uses sentences for all his songs so the verser(lines) go together just right.
For example,
I look up in her eyes,
Got me so hypnotized,
But i know she's all lies.
Keep writing Tyris your getting better kid.;)

[Majid]

Tyris your a real song writer, i enjoyed reading it.

[IrishKnight]

i liked it and u can use rhymezone.com for rhymes ... thats what i used all middle school for dumb english poetry : /

[SEAL_scout]

Tyris your a real song writer, i enjoyed reading it.

:goodpost::whs: I second that.

[Inbracer]

Thanks guys, thats cool ^^

[Ghost MacRoth]

Good Artists, like R. Kelly uses sentences for all his songs so the verser(lines) go together just right.
For example,
I look up in her eyes,
Got me so hypnotized,
But i know she's all lies.
Keep writing Tyris your getting better kid.;)

Did you just use 'good artists' and 'r-kelly' in the same sentence? Are you mental, or deaf? :rolleyes:

[IrishKnight]

ha or both didn't r kelly pee on a minor girl? thats weird and he is still in the closet rite? so hmmmmm.... i guess he gets -75 for unauthorized use of force and another - 25 for being in a closet so ummm... u do the math

[Ghost MacRoth]

-75 + -25 = D***

[Drepelitos]

excuse me but I don´t know of any programs.
:whs: the edit pro is capable not to be most appropriate but it only has a form to know lol

[wesley-dw]

FL Studio is the sofrware you need

[Tim]

Good Job on the song so far Tyris, keep up to good work, I like reading it good rhymes :)

Oh, please try not to double post there's an edit button :)

[SEAL_scout]

Good Job on the song so far Tyris, keep up to good work, I like reading it good rhymes :)

Oh, please try not to double post there's an edit button :)

:goodpost::whs:Keep up the good work and who knows you might end up having a career in singing.

[IrishKnight]

or u know there are people who just write songs and sell them to good singers if you aren't great at singing

[Inbracer]

im always balanced.. lol, career in singing, you wish xD

[Inbracer]

Well folks.. I would click edit button but i doubt anyone would notice :D

I edited my song whole bunch, i think guys who are in love and like romance (like me :$) will enjoy this song..

I was inspired by Nickleblack = here without you.. So play that song if you have it and read my song if you can!

Always walking in my dream
Walking the path I’we never seen
All I hear is my scream
Its hard to make that leap
Can’t awake from this sleep..

Gazing at the top floor
Keep your soul under control
Start walking to the door
Never loose the hold
Don’t let me be cold…

Dreams grant me the wish
To kiss girl that I miss

All the time so alone
Talking by the phone
I had to change my tone

Seeing your smile
You made me feel like paradise
Paradiseeee…

What keeps this body going…
What keeps my blood flowing
Is inside of me, the love is my key
I can never sleep… knowing that
You don’t know that… I love you!
If only you knew, how much I grew

That what keeps me so strong..
Is what makes me so wrong..

Don’t make a wish
Leave it as it is
Just let it be!
Nothing left to see

That's all I need!
That’s all I need!

Open your eyes to the mind,
Awake your soul from the bind

On the mirror I see my face
But all I see is a disgrace
Always wondering am I at right place

Just started to cry
Let my eyes go dry
You let me fly
I had to ask why!

See the fear in my heart
Didn’t want to be torn apart

I know you all my life
I wish that you would be my wife
I we been such a fool..
Working so hard in school!
All for your smile…

Trying to tame your heart
But now I’m doing the wrong part
I have to start..
to be your love dart!
All for you..

But now, don’t hold me back
I can’t look in my head!
I always knew..
Love is something you cant brew

Just started to cry
Let my eyes go dry..
There's no need to try
I don’t want say goodbye…

Always something to loose
Hard to tell what to choose

I love you soo much
That I will never feel your touch..

We should forget all of this
But I will always renember your kiss…
We never said farewell
It would hurt like hell
We kept our little spell
And we never fell

But I will anways have you on my mind
You we’re always so kind..
like the summer wind
Don’t be so blind,
I will always be your friend

When you need someone, give me a call
I will always be there and stand tall

When you need me
I will be by your side
I will be by your side….

When you need someone, give me a call
I will always be there and stand tall

I will be by your side….
And never will I say goodbye…

Other than that.. im not sure do i need any fixes, maybe grammer o.O but still!
All now i need is a music i think... lol well tell me what do you think about my words first lol xD

[Tim]

Nice :)

I we been such a fool..
Was wandering about this, is it suppose to be that way? Or maybe "I've Been such a fool.."

Just wandering ........ you like to double post :p