SucceededKiller
23-03-10, 08:19 PM
I might not post weekly but ill try to :D
I dont title my stuff so feel free to suggest one and give your opinions freely. If you dont like it then say so :D all criticism is good even if its bad. And most of these wont be incredibly good or good at all and thats why your opinion is wanted :D
Everything i post, unless it is a DL link, will be spoilered to save thread space :D If i do post a DL link then it will be appropriately highlighted as such.
Thanks for reading (if you do) :D
Also if you guys have an idea for me to write something about then encase it in spoiler BB code so i know what im looking for when viewing your inspirational ideas :D
Firstly:
It is 10 O'clock, the sun is up
guns start firing, yours is stuck.
When the trigger is pulled you expect a shot,
you get nothing. Just the barrel is hot.
Open the gun, search for the jam
you see the problem, it must be rammed.
Now it is fixed, your ready to shoot
align your cross hairs, hit the mans boot.
The man falls down, mud in his face
you go to shoot again, here come the chase.
Your men run down, they know it's never too late
machine guns drawn, it's the enemies fate.
The gun is cocked, finger on the trigger
as the barrel smokes you add on the figures.
Men falling down, it's part of your mission
to protect Britain you must first listen.
I dont title my stuff so feel free to suggest one and give your opinions freely. If you dont like it then say so :D all criticism is good even if its bad. And most of these wont be incredibly good or good at all and thats why your opinion is wanted :D
Everything i post, unless it is a DL link, will be spoilered to save thread space :D If i do post a DL link then it will be appropriately highlighted as such.
Thanks for reading (if you do) :D
Also if you guys have an idea for me to write something about then encase it in spoiler BB code so i know what im looking for when viewing your inspirational ideas :D
Firstly:
It is 10 O'clock, the sun is up
guns start firing, yours is stuck.
When the trigger is pulled you expect a shot,
you get nothing. Just the barrel is hot.
Open the gun, search for the jam
you see the problem, it must be rammed.
Now it is fixed, your ready to shoot
align your cross hairs, hit the mans boot.
The man falls down, mud in his face
you go to shoot again, here come the chase.
Your men run down, they know it's never too late
machine guns drawn, it's the enemies fate.
The gun is cocked, finger on the trigger
as the barrel smokes you add on the figures.
Men falling down, it's part of your mission
to protect Britain you must first listen.